I did a spell check on a few sections and added in a bit of description. Hope that's okay with you guys. --Roxy13~Dad, I'm a fairy! 21:26, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
it's fine, but don't add anything major if you catch my drift. just stick to spelling and grammer. SkyGuy-Let's chat! 00:59, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
Gotcha. By description, I just mean a few little things. It can get kind of hard to read when you've only got dialogue with no actions to go along with them. --Roxy13~Dad, I'm a fairy! 10:47, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
Book 1 Summary[]
The main plot of Book 1 is the girls meet each other, tackle the New Trix and become the New Winx. There are seven chapters in the book.--Babi Ariel~Don't you like my joke? 20:05, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
This story is moving very fast at the beginning, and it's all dialogue. My main addition to this will be setting. I'm good at that. And YES, SG, I will stick with the storyline. --Aliana*Anima della tundra! 00:33, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
If I must say, as I am a new user, I am not allowed to edit this page but I have spotted MANY grammar and spelling mistakes, including the very first sentence! I must say, somebody do something about it!--PhiTheArtist 16:15, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry, Phi! I'll sort it.--Babi Ariel~Don't you like my joke? 16:17, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
Me too! That's what I'm here for. --Aliana*Anima della tundra! 22:48, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks! For the new signature too!--PhiTheArtist~Talk To Me! 07:05, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
No prob. --Aliana*Anima della tundra! 10:59, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
This looks much better, mate. See what I mean?--TundraEmpress 23:43, September 1, 2011 (UTC)
I guess so. but would you not change titles of somebody elses works, even if there just a small hanging of it, without their permission. SkyGuy-Let's chat! 00:37, September 2, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten up! It's not a big deal. --TundraEmpress 00:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
Idea for Ariel's entrance[]
Any ideas? We can't just plop her down in there. Hmm...... this is where roleplaying would come in handy. --Aliana*Anima della tundra! 20:23, February 20, 2012 (UTC)